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I feel closer to you when we are nothing but words on a screen. You chide me away when I am near. Are you afraid to be close to me? Are u afraid of your own heart? I want you to feel this love I have for you. It warms my body, and calms my soul. If I had a wish it would be for you to see yourself how I see you. Your beautiful face, the tender glow of your eyes, those sweet soft lips in their coy smile, the slender curve of your neck that I would kiss so softly if I could, your heaving bosoms, the delicateness of your lean arms, and the long smooth flow of your legs down to your danty feet. I would want you to see all this so you would know why I always call you beautiful...... I would give you my life in sweet surender to you. So at very least I must thank you everyday for this love you make me feel. I am ever ready to help in what everway is needed. You are my dearest friend and a love that will not fade from my heart. Take my hand and arm and arm i would embrace you. I would be elated just to have you sleep by my side. Take care and take heart please know that you are not alone. As I live and breath I will be here always as your aid, and bridge over troubled waters...  For I love you from every fiber of my being and beyond and transending the singular self.. Thank you.
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I really can't think of a title .............. just wrote this up thinking of what I will never have..... I don't know if I like it yet .... I just had to write from the warm part of my heart ... so be honest and tell me what u think.

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:iconemberdragon:
This is so beautiful, +fav!! Keep it up..

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Hmm, looks very good and passionate until I read up to "your heaving bosoms"...(lol) I think you need to take that part out for it disrupts the flow in my poor little brain. The rest of it is beautifully written though. You picked the right title to go along with it too. Keep it up :)!!

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:iconhalcyonicrain:
uuummm, thats nice. :invisible:

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:iconbananagoddessaz:
love the vividness in describing the girl...it's like i can see her...very beautiful

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Death is but an Illusion
:iconangel-of-the-onewing:
thanks alot.......... I finally was able to get it out of my head in a nice form.
:iconbananagoddessaz:
well i think it came out great..and you're welcome!

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Death is but an Illusion

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